Poetry

[Rhyman]

Yeah James i belive you but i did got to the same school as you and i have the same evil english teacher

[Jay24092]

Aug 19, 2011 19:46:04 GMT Rhyman said:

Yeah James i belive you but i did got to the same school as you and i have the same evil english teacher

yeah i blamed my for not be able to spell that well eventhough i have dsylexisia man i really hate him

[thadudette]

(Not mine, but I thought it was funny ;D )

Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator

;D

Anyways *ahem* original poetry :3
I know the rhymes in the 2nd (3rd?) verse are cheesy but hey it rolls

"I will not die" - based on a true story

He came home from work far away
Dreading the news he might hear today
The doctor said, "I'm sorry, this news I must give,
She has a fifty-percent chance to live."
With tears in his eyes he said to her, "What will I do?
I've been away and I'm about to lose you."
She gazed into her husband's eyes and said,

"I will not die, but live,
The Lord will take and the Lord will give.
For the creator, the Rock on which I stand
Forever holds me in His healing hand."

Months later, waiting in the hospital again
In the face of trial, she still smiled then
A passerby stopped and saw her radiant smile
and asked, "May I ask if you are with child?"
And offered his congratulations.
"No," she said, "I'm going in for radiation,
But I know this is in His plan, for I know

I will not die, but live
The Lord will take and the Lord will give.
For the creator, the Rock on which I stand
Forever holds me in His healing hand."

Five years later, they stood in the hospital and
He reached out and squeezed her hand
With wide eyes, the doctor said "I'm so glad to say
Ma'am, you are cancer-free today.
I'm so glad for you, but it's just so odd."
She smiled and said "Sir, it's the healing hand of God.
In Him I trust, for I knew

I would not die, but live
The Lord will take and the Lord will give
For the Savior, the Rock on which I stand
Sings over me with His healing hand."

[Deleted]

End of Day

As the day goes on,
People begin to go home,
As the day seems gone.

Stoner

I have a friend who's a stoner.
He likes to smoke weed.
This stoner is not a loner.
He's never full of greed.
Because he's always carefree.

Ninja Man

I have a friend that's a ninja.
He has plenty of skills.
If you mess with him, he'll kill ya,
because he always gets plenty of kills.
And he always pays his bills.

[Deleted]

With life comes death
A death of no return
The day when even meth
will face its death

This day will be happy
This day will be sad
On this day,
All will cease to be.

That is why I implore you, my friends,
To live life to its fullest,
Not worrying about your ends.
I wish you all the best!

[Stove]

What is life?
A pot of gold?
An amazing adventure, or a treasure to behold.

What is life?
What we live every day?
When we Plead another to stay,stay,stay.

What is life?
It's you and me.
It's what we are now, and what we want to be.

[Deleted]

Her

As I look on from afar,
I know that we can never be,
Because I know exactly who we are,
Yet I can't help but see,
Her magnificent beauty.

[Stove]

My Life is a bore
It's much like a chore
I want to think otherwise
but its not much of a suprise

People think its all good
but then why do I have reason to brood?
Life is bad every day
and It's probably going to stay that way

People crush all my pride
I sometimes think about suicide
but what keeps me here?
is it who I love most dear?

But she's moved on now
into that place in the sky
so why do I continue now, to try, try ,try?

I dont know what to do with my life
its all filled with strife
maybe I cant see it well
But since I can't, oh well

I guess Ill stay a little longer
maybe Ill become a little stronger
There's a new opportunity every day
I can make it better, and make it stay that way

[Deleted]

Death is nothing to fear,
You just have to remember that your still here.
But is that enough? Do you need something more?
If you want, I could show you the door.

If someone dies before you, someone you care about,
It may be hard, but you may as well endure the bout,
with yourself.
Because... people care about you, and I'm always thinking of myself.

Dont go dieng, your not alone.
Theres nothing wrong with feeling pain, its ok to moan,
But lifes just beginning, and theres many more to love.
We may not be replacements, but theres plenty of doves.

All in all, the burden is not yours to bear,
We all feel sadness, but screw the rhymes!
Me, him, that guy over there, we'll help you enjoy life until it ends.
Just take whatever, with a smile, whatever your God sends.

[Deleted]

Everything I do hurts everyone I love
Everything I say is a lie
Why do I still try-
When I could just die?

Everyone I know hates me
Everyone I owe hates me
Everyone I love hates me
Why does everyone hate me!?

I just cause problems for others
Why do I still try!?
I hate all of those other mothers(as in mother effers)
Why cant I just die!?

[Deleted]

Haiku:

NEWSFLASH!
People love you both! I do!
STOP COMPLAINING AND PLEASE DONT DIE!

Please stop taking death so lightly. It wont make anything better.

[Deleted]

5-7-5 are
The way a haiku is made
Your haiku is wrong

[Deleted]

I honestly dont give a monkey. It doesn't make any difference to me, and I dont care about how its technically done.
All I'm saying is grow a pair and accept life for what it is instead of running away from it.

[Stove]

Mar 12, 2012 18:29:44 GMT @alberenza said:

I honestly dont give a monkey. It doesn't make any difference to me, and I dont care about how its technically done.
All I'm saying is grow a pair and accept life for what it is instead of running away from it.

...You obviously didnt read my full poem. It ended POSITIVELY.
I still look at my life POSITIVELY.
And you really have no room to talk, your life is pretty easy.

[Deleted]

Yeah, whatever...

[Indigo]

You've got some guts to say that, Steve.

How the heck can you know what he's been through, what he's felt throughout his life? Sounds like fishing for pity, if you ask me.

[Deleted]

Theres no such thing as an easy life, because even those with everything dont have enough... its human nature. I used to be more negative than you guys, ya know.

Thank you Claxus.

[Stove]

Well I guess you aren't very open about it, but yes, I do have guts to speak my mind, and it screws me over often.

[Deleted]

I just write poetry that evokes the emotions of others, such as that one I had posted before the haiku correcting u.
Im a literarily poetry expert

[Deleted]

That type of poetry isn't good poetry, if I didn't know who the author was then I would assume its just a whiny emo brat.
The fact that I knew it was you insinuated that you had some kind of problem and naturally I wanted to help, actually, that sort of attitude just plain pisses me off.
Good poetry makes you think, may have multiple meanings, it doesn't enrage you.
I bet your laughing your head off at my over reaction...