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Mar 13, 2012 23:46:57 GMT
Post by Death Eye on Mar 13, 2012 23:46:57 GMT
That type of poetry isn't good poetry, if I didn't know who the author was then I would assume its just a whiny emo brat. The fact that I knew it was you insinuated that you had some kind of problem and naturally I wanted to help, actually, that sort of attitude just plain pisses me off. Good poetry makes you think, may have multiple meanings, it doesn't enrage you. I bet your laughing your head off at my over reaction... Just throwing this out there: I can't claim to have any idea about anything pertaining to poetry... but I'm pretty sure this sort of thing is what made Emily Dickinson famous. Granted, I couldn't name a single one of her poems if my life depended on it, but I'm pretty sure her poems were all about being depressed or something. Also, being a fan of a lot of bands whose music sounds like that, uh, yeah, I think you get where I'm going with this... or at least I hope so, because I have no idea anymore. |
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Mar 13, 2012 23:47:55 GMT
Post by Deleted on Mar 13, 2012 23:47:55 GMT
Oh I dont know... I'm ok now.
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Mar 14, 2012 0:05:38 GMT
Post by Indigo on Mar 14, 2012 0:05:38 GMT
Do you ever feel like breaking down?
Do you ever feel out of place,
Like somehow you just don't belong
And no one understands you?
Do you ever wanna run away?
Do you lock yourself in your room
With the radio on turned up so loud
That no one hears you're screaming?
Man, you should see the comments for this song on Youtube. Omg this is my theme song! This is my song! This describes me so perfectly! Dropped like pennies.
Meh, humans just love their pity, especially around the teen age. Riku will get older and realize how foolish he's being. Steve at least has a ... Positive.. Outlook on life? I mean, he just kinda crammed the positive in at the last few lines, but whatever.
I mean, I went through a similar phase, too. I guess we all do.
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Mar 14, 2012 0:13:25 GMT
Post by Deleted on Mar 14, 2012 0:13:25 GMT
^ Yeah, I agree. I dont think theres a single person who doesn't.
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Mar 14, 2012 0:22:44 GMT
Post by Death Eye on Mar 14, 2012 0:22:44 GMT
^ Yeah, I agree. I dont think theres a single person who doesn't. I am "around the teen age" and I exploit my suffering to make conversation, not to educe pity. Does that count as the same thing? |
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Mar 14, 2012 1:38:03 GMT
Post by Deleted on Mar 14, 2012 1:38:03 GMT
Do you ever feel like breaking down? Do you ever feel out of place, Like somehow you just don't belong And no one understands you? Do you ever wanna run away? Do you lock yourself in your room With the radio on turned up so loud That no one hears you're screaming? Man, you should see the comments for this song on Youtube. Omg this is my theme song! This is my song! This describes me so perfectly! Dropped like pennies. Meh, humans just love their pity, especially around the teen age. Riku will get older and realize how foolish he's being. Steve at least has a ... Positive.. Outlook on life? I mean, he just kinda crammed the positive in at the last few lines, but whatever. I mean, I went through a similar phase, too. I guess we all do. I do look at life positively, I love writing love poems, and I endeavor to make sad poems, like the Raven and The Bells I just dont really.......... wanna put love poems here.......... |
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Mar 14, 2012 1:41:47 GMT
Post by Stove on Mar 14, 2012 1:41:47 GMT
Do you ever feel like breaking down? Do you ever feel out of place, Like somehow you just don't belong And no one understands you? Do you ever wanna run away? Do you lock yourself in your room With the radio on turned up so loud That no one hears you're screaming? Man, you should see the comments for this song on Youtube. Omg this is my theme song! This is my song! This describes me so perfectly! Dropped like pennies. Meh, humans just love their pity, especially around the teen age. Riku will get older and realize how foolish he's being. Steve at least has a ... Positive.. Outlook on life? I mean, he just kinda crammed the positive in at the last few lines, but whatever. I mean, I went through a similar phase, too. I guess we all do. The point of mine was sort of about my...revelation a month or so ago. |
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Mar 14, 2012 1:42:14 GMT
Post by Deleted on Mar 14, 2012 1:42:14 GMT
With life comes death A death of no return The day when even meth will face its death This day will be happy This day will be sad On this day, All will cease to be. That is why I implore you, my friends, To live life to its fullest, Not worrying about your ends. I wish you all the best! look at this one This is what I mean I do look at life positively i just write poes that sound like I have a hard life, yet i dont. I actually love my life, in a sense, and i would love to live in this life for a good time. |
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Mar 15, 2012 1:18:22 GMT
Post by Deleted on Mar 15, 2012 1:18:22 GMT
We have to make a sonnet for school, and here is what Ive got so far
Her beauty is like something unforeseen
Yet, I know that we can never be one
For life just decides to be mean
Yet I know that our love is not yet done
I remember when we were together
I hate the stuff people would always say
We'd say we'd be together forever
I no longer know what I could now say
I need another quatrain and a couplet
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Apr 21, 2012 23:45:49 GMT
Post by Deleted on Apr 21, 2012 23:45:49 GMT
Broken
We are all broken
Noone is perfect
Even those self-spoken
We try so hard
All for what?
Just to be another playing card?
Why are are we all broken?
Is it because we love?
We are all just chokin
Chokin on our feelings
The feelings that make us broken
These feelings cause pain that stings
This sense of being broken
Is what makes us perfect.
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Apr 28, 2012 18:06:40 GMT
Post by Deleted on Apr 28, 2012 18:06:40 GMT
You
Who the fuk do you think you are kidding?
When you are just bidding and bidding
You are never gonna be winning
You are never gonna be grinning
Look at all the lies you've told
They are all already much to old
You're like a man that gives out fake gold
"Here, you can have this, woops, it's already been sold"
Why the fuk do you do what you do?
Kickin others' hopes with the tip of your shoe
Why the fuk you doin this to yourslf foo?
You coulda had wings and you coulda flew
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Sept 27, 2012 3:20:31 GMT
Post by thadudette on Sept 27, 2012 3:20:31 GMT
And the world comes at me once again
With all the pain it had when it began
Lifting me from one reality to the next
One of despair, one heaven blessed
Discern your life, the false and true
The world you once thought you knew
In every darkness, there is a light
In every blindness, there is a sight
When despair hems me in from all around
May the lies flee, may they fall to the ground
For I know where I stand and where I’ll fall
Regardless of the siren of the world’s call
Singly I cannot endure alone
I count my blessings, all I have known
Finding that you’ve always been there
And reminded me of the Father’s care
Find me now, find me here
When the world strikes into me fear
You’re always there, and more and more
You light my world to see the Lord
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