Poetry

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This is a haiku that I made in spanish class before I fell asleep.

Love is two edged,
Love may bring you happiness,
Love may bring you death.

[Dogmantra]

Hmmm... I'm something of a pote. I might have to post some of my pomes for your reading pleasure.

[Admin]

Jan 25, 2011 1:17:46 GMT @rubynooby said:

This is a haiku that I made in spanish class before I fell asleep.

Not to sound disrespectful, but that made me laugh so loud.

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Go ahead I love poetry though I don't get much time for them.

[Dogmantra]

I chose my second most disturbing pome for you then.

Simon says to work all day,
Simon says you can never play.
Simon says you'll get no pay.
Simon says to like it.

Simon says to wear these clothes,
Exploited factory workers wove.
Simon says "eat this, not those."
Simon says to like it.

Simon says you're getting fat,
Simon says he won't like that.
Simon says get a dog, not a cat.
Simon says to like it.

Be at peace with your flaws.
Be okay you're a sinner.
With a grin, Simon speaks:
"Well done. You're all winners."

Yay.

[dillybar64]

Jan 25, 2011 11:32:31 GMT Dogmantra said:

I chose my second most disturbing pome for you then.

Simon says to work all day,
Simon says you can never play.
Simon says you'll get no pay.
Simon says to like it.

Simon says to wear these clothes,
Exploited factory workers wove.
Simon says "eat this, not those."
Simon says to like it.

Simon says you're getting fat,
Simon says he won't like that.
Simon says get a dog, not a cat.
Simon says to like it.

Be at peace with your flaws.
Be okay you're a sinner.
With a grin, Simon speaks:
"Well done. You're all winners."

Yay.

How is that disturbing at all?

[Dogmantra]

Jan 25, 2011 23:35:29 GMT dillybar64 said:

How is that disturbing at all?

Well let's see

It's ransacked a childhood game to make a point about how crap things can be and are, I find it depressing, but the disturbing part is that I came up with it.

Me.

You don't see how that's disturbing?

For posterity, attached is a list of three other things that I find disturbing:
Cars
Driving
Make up

[thadudette]

I write songs and poems once in a while, maybe I'll post something if I ever get in the mood.

Jan 26, 2011 1:13:59 GMT Dogmantra said:

For posterity, attached is a list of three other things that I find disturbing:
Make up

*sticks on AGREE sticker*

[Deleted]

Nice poem Dogmantra.

Also I have to say that most of my poems, hiakus and other things related to poetry are all based on my love for someone that doesn't love me back; my second crush and my third crush.

[craneknight]

I got some songs but they're sad and long so i won't post them

[Deleted]

My new gotcha force hiaku that I made in Spanish class because that is my nap class that I sleep in.

Ninja Borgs
Ninja borgs are best,
With their swords and heads held high,
Death Arc can't compare.

[insanityscythe]

My new signature is a free verse poem of sorts that i came up with while i was suffering from extreme boredom in writing class. And in case some of you are too lazy to scroll down and read the tiny print,

The singularity, a thing beyond the grasp of time and space, When man reaches it they expect a window to the truth, but find only a mirror.

Man sees this mirror as trickery, but seen from my eyes it is a endless and eternal corridor of an existence that does not exist.


(ps, this poem may contain a political undertone , or it may not )

[Stove]

Poets, yay. I love poetry. I made a haiku in Social Science, when I was supposed to take notes (I still got a B- on the Test tho! ;D) Here it is:

Memento Mori
"Remember that you will die"
Latin makes me sad
;D ;D ;D

[Dogmantra]

I call this one "Vn" (It's my best textual approximation of someone giving the "peace!" sign with their hand.)

I miss your smile and your sense of irony
That's not quite ironic but
For me and you it's adequate.
I miss our non-explicit hugs
I'll never need illicit drugs
With you here for my highs
You're my heroine
And that should come as no suprise
And as my day is ending
I think of all those you're befriending
Who never knew you
Who can't see through into the true you
And I can't believe I never knew before
Opportunity is not a door,
It's a building site putting up a wall
That's entirely unbreakable
And when you're gone and the only one left is me
This pathetic male visage is the only thing I see
I lie through teeth and say I'm fine.

I've been a girl since I was nine.

(CAN YOU TELL I LIKE RHYMING)

[shadowbite]

Short yet full of depth... I love to write myself

[dillybar64]

I like poems, however I am not that good at making them.
This is pretty much the best I've been able to make.
I was playing around with making the rhyme scheme all masculine A's, I wanted all lines to have 7 beats to them and I tried to add more internal rhymes as the poem goes on to convey annoyance and repetition.
What do you think?

Progress
Lots of lines I’ve been in late
Waiting, waiting, waiting, wait
Oh these lines I’ve come to hate
Waiting, waiting, wait wait wait
Come on now or I’ll be late
Waiting, waiting, wait wait wait
Never get through at this rate
Wait wait wait wait wait wait wait

[Jay24092]

a poem about my little sister

My little sister is
always there when you need her.
My little sister is the
best little sister ever
and i would not trade her for anything.
My little sister has
a way of making everyone
laugh when they have a bad day.
My little sister is one of a kind
My little sister is annoying to,
but i still love her anyways.
My little sister
is also my best friend.

[Jay24092]

the moon

Where has this moon gone?
the moon that used to brighten up
the night sky,
And the moon that used to shine
Brighter than any star,
The moon that used to bring to me
This beautiful light,
For this moon used to lighten up
My heart,
Now that this moon is gone
I must rely on the stars
to bring me light,
This moon left me alone,
alone to suffer and think
empty thoughts,
And now i know that
I am lost,
Oh where has this moon gone?

[Rhyman]

Aug 9, 2011 19:41:16 GMT Jay24092 said:

the moon

Where has this moon gone?
the moon that used to brighten up
the night sky,
And the moon that used to shine
Brighter than any star,
The moon that used to bring to me
This beautiful light,
For this moon used to lighten up
My heart,
Now that this moon is gone
I must rely on the stars
to bring me light,
This moon left me alone,
alone to suffer and think
empty thoughts,
And now i know that
I am lost,
Oh where has this moon gone?

James that poem seems very close to mine that i wrote in English

[Jay24092]

Aug 19, 2011 10:54:35 GMT Rhyman said:

Aug 9, 2011 19:41:16 GMT Jay24092 said:

the moon

Where has this moon gone?
the moon that used to brighten up
the night sky,
And the moon that used to shine
Brighter than any star,
The moon that used to bring to me
This beautiful light,
For this moon used to lighten up
My heart,
Now that this moon is gone
I must rely on the stars
to bring me light,
This moon left me alone,
alone to suffer and think
empty thoughts,
And now i know that
I am lost,
Oh where has this moon gone?

Yeah but this one is my version from school and i got a B for it


James that poem seems very close to mine that i wrote in English