Post by Rikuseroth on Oct 30, 2013 5:51:45 GMT
So, here is the new story I have begun for a total of four.
After I get this published, I plan on updating my stories in this order:
Elsword
Dcuo
Incredibles
But here's the beginning, all forms of criticism accepted.
Summary
Once a Villain, then a Hero, now a Runaway, Jinx has left the Titans after her and Kid Flash broke up, and she has committed a crime against the Titans, but now the villains she betrayed as well as the heroes betrayed are both pursuing her. Despite all this, a new face stands beside her as she works to save and help her new friends.
Chapter 1
Pursued by two different teams at once, Jinx ran. Two from each side had been after this time. Gizmo and Mammoth chased after her for H.I.V.E. while Robin and BeastBoy were after her for the Teen Titans.
'Dammit!'she thought' This is all his fault! If it weren't for him, I wouldn't have left either team'
The event played over in her mind.
She had went to visit Kid Flash, it was the anniversary of their relationship, and she wanted to see him. She arrived at his house to see him with a blonde archer, making out. This infuriated her to no bounds. The feeling of betrayal was rampant in her heart. She touched the door, causing her power of hexes to blow the doorknob off. This startled both the speedster and the archer.
"Babe, I can explain. It's a funny story and-"Kid Flash started, but was cut off as a sharp pain in his legs came unexpectedly. His legs were twisted unnaturally as Jinx trailed a hex from the wall to his feet trailing up his legs. She then went to the archer, grabbing both her arms. The blonde screamed, as Jinx charged her power of hexes into the other girl's arms, shattering the bones beyond repair.
Jinx hadn't realized what she'd done until moments after. Jinx ran. She ran as fast as she could. She knew the Titans would be after her soon enough. So, she fled to H.I.V.E. for help. She was greeted by her former teammates who immediately lunged at her with comment like "You betrayed us!" and "You left us!" Jinx barely escaped them, had it not been for the size of the door, she would've been captured by them. Jinx could no longer think of anyone who she could turn to.
Jinx eventually found a nice quiet place to stay. It was a cheap motel, but she needed the rest. She little money, but just enough to pay for a room and it wasn't too long before she fell asleep.
Jinx woke up, at first thinking it was all a dream, but opened her eyes to find she wasn't where she'd thought she'd be. Jinx began to cry as her life was over. She had no one to turn to. The Titans would hate her, her old team hated her, and she was now alone. A knock came to the door, and then the door was rammed in by a green ram, immediately prompting Jinx to start using her powers on everything as she jumped through a window, slamming Starfire to the ground. She got up before they could grab her and ran. She ran fast. As fast as possible, running into an alley. She looked back to see she was losing the Titans after her, but then into a large figure, knocking her down. It was Mammoth, accompanied by Gizmo. Jinx backed up and got up, ready to run, only to be cornered by the two of the Titans, Robin, and BeastBoy. Each duo looked each other over as they assumed they were all after Jinx. Each duo leaped toward her, to see who could capture her first, but each was blocked by dark barriers on each side.
"It really isn't fair for four on one, so let me make this fair"said a boy as he jumped down from one of the buildings around. He was a teenager, you could tell by his figure. He was slim. He dark hair that was covered by the hood of his jacket which was left unzipped. He wore skinny jeans that weren't too tight fitting, leaving room for movement. His jacket was black, and had buttons that could be buttoned over the zipper. His shirt was black, but had the word red spelled down one side.
"Don't get in our way Snot-brain!"Gizmo shouted angrily
"Step aside. You don't need to involve yourself with her. She's a criminal"Robin stated as he cautiously walked closer
Robin saw that the dark powers displayed were similar to Raven's, but noticed they were also very different.
"Criminal or not, she's obviously scared an outnumbered and I'm here to make it even."the new teen said
"I didn't ask for help!"Jinx said to try and maintain her look
"Either way"he reached into the ground"I don't like to see one person fighting against great odds"he pulled his shadow into his hand, putting his hands together and then pulling at something, making what looked like a scythe. "I'll take the titans"he said as he lunged Robin who blocked the dark scythe with his own bo-staff.
Jinx was outwardly irritated at him, but was relieved on the inside as she was being charged by Mammoth with Gizmo flying over her with his jet pack, shooting a rocket at her. Jinx shot a hex at the rocket as she directed Mammoth into a wall. Jinx jumped up, grabbing the now panicked Gizmo's leg, and using her power to destroy his jetpack. She threw him to the ground, knocking him unconscious. With her two out of the way, she looked behind her to see the boy in combat with the two titans. This was her chance to run, but..... Something inside made her stay and wait for him. She decided to watch and see what he's capable of.
Robin was locked in combat with the shadow wielder. BeastBoy turned to a bird and began to fly over them, but was grabbed by a shadow, and slammed into a wall, going unconscious. Robin seemed to intensify his attacks after that. He began to throw bombs and birdarangs when he had an opportunity. These were countered by shadow walls and spikes that would penetrate the projectiles. The two clashed with their weapons. As they fought. Shadow spikes would grow from the ground and cut Robin on his legs, chest, and arms. Eventually, Robin was tired and aching from the numerous cuts on his body.
Robin looked at him with some anger"Who are you?"
"Well, my friends call me Matt, but you can call me Shade"Matt said as his scythe dissipated into the ground, restoring his shadow to its original form.
Jinx was impressed. She could tell he knew what he was doing and had some skill. "So, why is it that you helped me?"
"Unfortunately, I didn't help you just because you're pretty. What I said before is true though."he replied as he made his shadow like an elevator that lifted them up the building. There was a bag of money on the top that he picked up and slung over his shoulder.
"So, what now? They're just gonna keep going after me"Jinx said worrying about what to do next
"I think I have some friends that might be happy to meet you, and hey, maybe you can help me. If you follow me, I can tell you everything when we get there"Matt offered with a smile as he headed away from where they left the Titans and H.I.V.E. members.
Jinx didn't want to follow him, but she didn't have anywhere else to go. Being offered a place to stay sounded great.
It was 25 minutes of walking before they reached their destination. It looked like an orphanage. Matt led her to the side and he entered first.
"Hey, everyone, I'm back"he said loudly enough so anyone within would hear it
Jinx expected more teens or maybe gang members, but instead saw a dozen kids run up to him and hug him. Then a door closed loudly and silence was all that ensued. An older lady, with white hair, wearing a dress. She had a small girl with her. The lady's hand rested on the girl's shoulder. The girl seemed scared, and Jinx was about to go over to help her before Matt walked over to them.
"I got the money just as we discussed. This should last for the month, so let her go"he said with a stern tone as he put the bag in the floor, letting his shadow slide it to her. As it reached her, she let the girl go. The girl ran to Matt and hugged him.
"Good, good. Next time, have the money sooner, otherwise I'll have to... 'Punish' one if the children again"the lady said with a smile as she walked away with the money"I have to ask. Who is this girl and why have you brought her?"she stopped and asked, referring to Jinx
"I'm offering to let her stay here, and maybe she can help us, or I can always just get more money than usual in order to pay for her"
"Well, whatever you decide, make sure we have more money next time."she left the main hall
"Kids, go and get ready for dinner. I'll start on it in a few minutes."Matt then kneeled down to the girl who seemed about 5 or 6" Are you hurt anywhere?"
"Just on my back"she said sadly as she turned to show that her shirt was even bloody in the back. Matt seemed enraged to see this, but held himself back.
"Jinx, there is a first-aid kit in the cupboard, can you please bandage her wounds? I have to start on dinner and I don't want the other kids to whine"he said, his eyes pleading with her
"S-sure"Jinx replied
"Go with Jinx here, and she'll help make the pain go away"Matt said with a smile and she nodded
The girl grabbed Jinx's hand which surprised the pink haired girl, who continued to the cupboard.
She put some bandages on the girl's back after disinfecting what looked like lashings.
The little girl smiled and hugged Jinx afterward, thanking her for helping her and soothing the pain. Jinx felt a warm sense of happiness with this.
'Maybe I can really help them here'Jinx thought to herself as she went what she assumed would be the kitchen to find Matt cooking some food
"So, you can see why I asked for your help"
"How did this happen? Why can't you just use your powers on her?"
"She has a power of her own. She has a piece of herself planted on each kid, and she can cause pain for them and even kill them. Aslong as she's satisfied, I won't have to worry, but I can only do so much as one person. I've already been unable to save a few other kids"
"I... I want to help"
"Thank you. Dinner's almost ready, so wash up. Afterwards I'll get your room situated"
Jinx smiled at him as she went to go wash up for dinner. Knowing she'd be able to help and have a place to stay.
After I get this published, I plan on updating my stories in this order:
Elsword
Dcuo
Incredibles
But here's the beginning, all forms of criticism accepted.
Summary
Once a Villain, then a Hero, now a Runaway, Jinx has left the Titans after her and Kid Flash broke up, and she has committed a crime against the Titans, but now the villains she betrayed as well as the heroes betrayed are both pursuing her. Despite all this, a new face stands beside her as she works to save and help her new friends.
Chapter 1
Pursued by two different teams at once, Jinx ran. Two from each side had been after this time. Gizmo and Mammoth chased after her for H.I.V.E. while Robin and BeastBoy were after her for the Teen Titans.
'Dammit!'she thought' This is all his fault! If it weren't for him, I wouldn't have left either team'
The event played over in her mind.
She had went to visit Kid Flash, it was the anniversary of their relationship, and she wanted to see him. She arrived at his house to see him with a blonde archer, making out. This infuriated her to no bounds. The feeling of betrayal was rampant in her heart. She touched the door, causing her power of hexes to blow the doorknob off. This startled both the speedster and the archer.
"Babe, I can explain. It's a funny story and-"Kid Flash started, but was cut off as a sharp pain in his legs came unexpectedly. His legs were twisted unnaturally as Jinx trailed a hex from the wall to his feet trailing up his legs. She then went to the archer, grabbing both her arms. The blonde screamed, as Jinx charged her power of hexes into the other girl's arms, shattering the bones beyond repair.
Jinx hadn't realized what she'd done until moments after. Jinx ran. She ran as fast as she could. She knew the Titans would be after her soon enough. So, she fled to H.I.V.E. for help. She was greeted by her former teammates who immediately lunged at her with comment like "You betrayed us!" and "You left us!" Jinx barely escaped them, had it not been for the size of the door, she would've been captured by them. Jinx could no longer think of anyone who she could turn to.
Jinx eventually found a nice quiet place to stay. It was a cheap motel, but she needed the rest. She little money, but just enough to pay for a room and it wasn't too long before she fell asleep.
Jinx woke up, at first thinking it was all a dream, but opened her eyes to find she wasn't where she'd thought she'd be. Jinx began to cry as her life was over. She had no one to turn to. The Titans would hate her, her old team hated her, and she was now alone. A knock came to the door, and then the door was rammed in by a green ram, immediately prompting Jinx to start using her powers on everything as she jumped through a window, slamming Starfire to the ground. She got up before they could grab her and ran. She ran fast. As fast as possible, running into an alley. She looked back to see she was losing the Titans after her, but then into a large figure, knocking her down. It was Mammoth, accompanied by Gizmo. Jinx backed up and got up, ready to run, only to be cornered by the two of the Titans, Robin, and BeastBoy. Each duo looked each other over as they assumed they were all after Jinx. Each duo leaped toward her, to see who could capture her first, but each was blocked by dark barriers on each side.
"It really isn't fair for four on one, so let me make this fair"said a boy as he jumped down from one of the buildings around. He was a teenager, you could tell by his figure. He was slim. He dark hair that was covered by the hood of his jacket which was left unzipped. He wore skinny jeans that weren't too tight fitting, leaving room for movement. His jacket was black, and had buttons that could be buttoned over the zipper. His shirt was black, but had the word red spelled down one side.
"Don't get in our way Snot-brain!"Gizmo shouted angrily
"Step aside. You don't need to involve yourself with her. She's a criminal"Robin stated as he cautiously walked closer
Robin saw that the dark powers displayed were similar to Raven's, but noticed they were also very different.
"Criminal or not, she's obviously scared an outnumbered and I'm here to make it even."the new teen said
"I didn't ask for help!"Jinx said to try and maintain her look
"Either way"he reached into the ground"I don't like to see one person fighting against great odds"he pulled his shadow into his hand, putting his hands together and then pulling at something, making what looked like a scythe. "I'll take the titans"he said as he lunged Robin who blocked the dark scythe with his own bo-staff.
Jinx was outwardly irritated at him, but was relieved on the inside as she was being charged by Mammoth with Gizmo flying over her with his jet pack, shooting a rocket at her. Jinx shot a hex at the rocket as she directed Mammoth into a wall. Jinx jumped up, grabbing the now panicked Gizmo's leg, and using her power to destroy his jetpack. She threw him to the ground, knocking him unconscious. With her two out of the way, she looked behind her to see the boy in combat with the two titans. This was her chance to run, but..... Something inside made her stay and wait for him. She decided to watch and see what he's capable of.
Robin was locked in combat with the shadow wielder. BeastBoy turned to a bird and began to fly over them, but was grabbed by a shadow, and slammed into a wall, going unconscious. Robin seemed to intensify his attacks after that. He began to throw bombs and birdarangs when he had an opportunity. These were countered by shadow walls and spikes that would penetrate the projectiles. The two clashed with their weapons. As they fought. Shadow spikes would grow from the ground and cut Robin on his legs, chest, and arms. Eventually, Robin was tired and aching from the numerous cuts on his body.
Robin looked at him with some anger"Who are you?"
"Well, my friends call me Matt, but you can call me Shade"Matt said as his scythe dissipated into the ground, restoring his shadow to its original form.
Jinx was impressed. She could tell he knew what he was doing and had some skill. "So, why is it that you helped me?"
"Unfortunately, I didn't help you just because you're pretty. What I said before is true though."he replied as he made his shadow like an elevator that lifted them up the building. There was a bag of money on the top that he picked up and slung over his shoulder.
"So, what now? They're just gonna keep going after me"Jinx said worrying about what to do next
"I think I have some friends that might be happy to meet you, and hey, maybe you can help me. If you follow me, I can tell you everything when we get there"Matt offered with a smile as he headed away from where they left the Titans and H.I.V.E. members.
Jinx didn't want to follow him, but she didn't have anywhere else to go. Being offered a place to stay sounded great.
It was 25 minutes of walking before they reached their destination. It looked like an orphanage. Matt led her to the side and he entered first.
"Hey, everyone, I'm back"he said loudly enough so anyone within would hear it
Jinx expected more teens or maybe gang members, but instead saw a dozen kids run up to him and hug him. Then a door closed loudly and silence was all that ensued. An older lady, with white hair, wearing a dress. She had a small girl with her. The lady's hand rested on the girl's shoulder. The girl seemed scared, and Jinx was about to go over to help her before Matt walked over to them.
"I got the money just as we discussed. This should last for the month, so let her go"he said with a stern tone as he put the bag in the floor, letting his shadow slide it to her. As it reached her, she let the girl go. The girl ran to Matt and hugged him.
"Good, good. Next time, have the money sooner, otherwise I'll have to... 'Punish' one if the children again"the lady said with a smile as she walked away with the money"I have to ask. Who is this girl and why have you brought her?"she stopped and asked, referring to Jinx
"I'm offering to let her stay here, and maybe she can help us, or I can always just get more money than usual in order to pay for her"
"Well, whatever you decide, make sure we have more money next time."she left the main hall
"Kids, go and get ready for dinner. I'll start on it in a few minutes."Matt then kneeled down to the girl who seemed about 5 or 6" Are you hurt anywhere?"
"Just on my back"she said sadly as she turned to show that her shirt was even bloody in the back. Matt seemed enraged to see this, but held himself back.
"Jinx, there is a first-aid kit in the cupboard, can you please bandage her wounds? I have to start on dinner and I don't want the other kids to whine"he said, his eyes pleading with her
"S-sure"Jinx replied
"Go with Jinx here, and she'll help make the pain go away"Matt said with a smile and she nodded
The girl grabbed Jinx's hand which surprised the pink haired girl, who continued to the cupboard.
She put some bandages on the girl's back after disinfecting what looked like lashings.
The little girl smiled and hugged Jinx afterward, thanking her for helping her and soothing the pain. Jinx felt a warm sense of happiness with this.
'Maybe I can really help them here'Jinx thought to herself as she went what she assumed would be the kitchen to find Matt cooking some food
"So, you can see why I asked for your help"
"How did this happen? Why can't you just use your powers on her?"
"She has a power of her own. She has a piece of herself planted on each kid, and she can cause pain for them and even kill them. Aslong as she's satisfied, I won't have to worry, but I can only do so much as one person. I've already been unable to save a few other kids"
"I... I want to help"
"Thank you. Dinner's almost ready, so wash up. Afterwards I'll get your room situated"
Jinx smiled at him as she went to go wash up for dinner. Knowing she'd be able to help and have a place to stay.
