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Post by Rikuseroth on Aug 8, 2013 4:26:10 GMT
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Post by Stove on Aug 9, 2013 4:29:24 GMT
Fanfics are the root of all evil.
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Post by Rikuseroth on Aug 9, 2013 4:41:52 GMT
Fanfics are the root of all evil. Lol, that's why mine is an oc story
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Post by Stove on Aug 9, 2013 4:42:39 GMT
Fanfics are the root of all evil. Lol, that's why mine is an oc story I see. Alicia the Aisha, eh?
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Post by Rikuseroth on Aug 9, 2013 4:45:20 GMT
Lol, that's why mine is an oc story I see. Alicia the Aisha, eh? Yesh, either that or Sylvia lol I'm not good with female names
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Post by Stove on Aug 9, 2013 4:46:09 GMT
I see. Alicia the Aisha, eh? Yesh, either that or Sylvia lol I'm not good with female names So my names have rubbed off on you. Anyway, I liked the first chapter.
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Post by Rikuseroth on Aug 9, 2013 4:50:46 GMT
Yesh, either that or Sylvia lol I'm not good with female names So my names have rubbed off on you. Anyway, I liked the first chapter. What do you think of the reviews the people left? What should I work on? HELP ME PLEASE!!!
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Post by Stove on Aug 9, 2013 23:24:48 GMT
So my names have rubbed off on you. Anyway, I liked the first chapter. What do you think of the reviews the people left? What should I work on? HELP ME PLEASE!!! I agree with the reviewers for the most part, you should add more vivid detail. Personally I prefer (in rps) to let people use their imagination, but a solo story needs more detail.
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Post by Rikuseroth on Aug 12, 2013 22:43:25 GMT
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Post by Rikuseroth on Aug 15, 2013 6:06:30 GMT
^^^^^^^
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Post by Stove on Aug 15, 2013 14:34:42 GMT
I am eagerly awaiting chapter 3.
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Post by Rikuseroth on Aug 15, 2013 16:20:04 GMT
I am eagerly awaiting chapter 3. Chapter 3 will have some time skips
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Post by Rikuseroth on Aug 23, 2013 0:29:35 GMT
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Post by Rikuseroth on Oct 9, 2013 21:42:32 GMT
Finally got a chapter of my elsword fic done It's not that long, not that great, and I'm still not sure what dimension witch can do lol
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