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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2012 18:03:55 GMT
Yeah. Not finished with this chapter yet.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2012 19:11:42 GMT
That was really code geass-ish. Oh well, this is much better than I had originally planned!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2012 21:41:14 GMT
Crap... I've run out of stuff such as the CONCEPT and a general plan of how I want the story to continue.
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Post by Stove on Feb 7, 2012 23:47:32 GMT
Now I'm the paranoid one. Different race that takes the souls of humans, but getting the souls of their own kind is better, to live longer.
Griiiiim....
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Post by Deleted on Feb 8, 2012 7:53:37 GMT
mmm, good point. Actually, it's a delusion, he cant really get imortality through that. Efah is one F'd up kid.
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Post by Stove on Feb 8, 2012 8:11:59 GMT
^ Well itmakes sense since it looks like his name is pronounced F'er.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 8, 2012 8:28:30 GMT
^ Haha! Yeah, thats pretty good. I got loads of ideas for characters but I'm worried it will become a pointless character fest rather then a story. mmm... I could make it like Darker than black, in that I focus around one group of characters with the main character involved at the side. Nah... well, we'll see, it may turn out like that, but I'll do it better.
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