Post by PandaBrady on Dec 31, 2011 2:28:33 GMT
This I have made for my own story, tell me what you think Via PM, I'll be posting this elsewhere as well. See if you can find where I get my inspiration.
New Grand City Series
Super Sweet Squad
Characters Introduced:
Prof. Lyle Doctome “Prof. D”/DoctoniumMan Age:35
Alex Doctome/ Axel Age: 14
A.P.P. (Artificial Personality Pup) Age: 6 (Robot Dog)
Ruby Doctome Age: 14
Robin Doctome Age: 14
Emerald “Emmy” Doctome Age: 14
Amethyst “Amy” Doctome Age: 14
Derik Kouha Age: 14
Craz Einstein Saru “Malevolent M” Age: 25 (A Genetically altered Monkey)
Chapter 1: Welcome
(We open in the car of the Doctome Family, everyone is very quiet, Amy is reading a book, Robin is coloring something that looks like a horse, with the words cat above it, Ruby is listening to a movie on a portable DVD player, and Emmy is staring out the window, looking like she is about to punch something. Alex is working on a robot in his hands and A.P.P is asleep)
Emmy: So, Dad, Why are we moving again?
Prof. D: I told you already, because I was given a job offer there, and I can’t keep paying for the repairs on our old city off of what I make. Besides, this will be a good way for you to make new friends, and a new experience. I also heard that you won’t be alone anymore. (All of the siblings look up)
Ruby: What do you mean? (Prof. D Smiles wide)
Prof. D: New Grand City has many superheroes living here, so you won’t be so different. (All smile)
Robin: Yay, we’ll be normal!
Emmy: (aside) Some of us anyway. (The ground begins to shake and the car shakes and screeches to a halt as the road tears away and a large robot, shaped like a Monkey with a Banana on it’s forehead climbs through the crack.)
: OohOohahahah.
Prof. D: Of all the- why did HE have to follow us.
Ruby: Craz E. Saru.
Craz: I, the Malevolent M, have come, once again, to destroy you, the puny, super sweet sisters. This time, I am prepared, for everything. Everything You could throw at me, it is useless, for I, The Malevolent M, Evil Genius, have created a robot, which, you girls, shall not be defeating this time. (During this monologue the robot does different poses, each one, more monkey-like and ridiculous than the last. The final one, the robot is flexing its muscles.)
Ruby: Let’s go. (she unbuckled her seat belt, the others followed suit, Doctome, Alex, and App staying. The girls then flew up into the air.)
Ruby: I was in the middle of a good movie, with my favorite actor in it too. (She Grips her fist, which coats in ice, which she then throws at the robot. It hits and begins to freeze, but the robot turns red as it melts the ice.)
Craz: Oohahaha, I knew you’d try that move, so I gave my robot an internal heater, but to combat your fireball, I also have a tundra coolant system.
Robin: You messed up my drawing, try this. (she then lets loose a high pitch screech, the waves shown bounce off and shatter the windows of the car.) oops, sorry da- (the robot punches her away.)
Craz: My robot, it is made of Pulsanium, designed to withstand any vibration. Ooohahaha.
Amy: I lost my place in my book! You hit Robin too! (She strokes her hair, and forms, what looks like, a purple bookmark, which she throws at the robot, crackling with electricity. Craz’s robot opens up a generator, absorbing the electricity.)
Craz: HahahaOoOoAh! You power my robot even more. Hahaha.
Emmy: It’s about time we had some fun. Rahh! (she flys forward and punches the robot, then backs up and releases a burst of energy from her hands, similar to a kamehameha wave. The beam bounces off of the robot and hits the ground, causing a small explosion)
Craz: ~Reflective armor~. (Craz says dancing in his robot, then charges up his own beam in one of his robots hands. Before he can release it another robot appears and rips off the hand.)
: Not so fast, you are in the jurisdiction of the NGCPD, if you refuse to come along peacefully. (Craz swings at the robot as it nimbly ducks) I’ll have to use force! (The other robot then begins fighting Craz’s robot, slowly ripping it limb from limb)
Ruby: Wait, that voice! It couldn’t be, Derik Kouha, the Genius Star! (Derik’s Robot then ties the robot up, with its own arms)
Derik: I see my reputation precedes me. (He then hefts the robot over his robots shoulder the cockpit of his opens and out steps a teenage boy.) Welcome to New Grand City, I’ve heard you were coming, and wanted to welcome you. Also you’ll be happy to know that the villains of your old city have left the city.
Ruby: Omigosh, you are Derik Kouha, I’m sucha big fan! Can I have your autograph?! (She flies up to him holding an autograph book.)
Prof. D: Ruby, get down here. (Ruby flies down, the rest follow.) We’d be happy for the escort, thank you. (Prof. D turns to the girls) could you girls fly our car behind Derik’s robot? (The girls lift the car and fly into the air, following the robot, it leads them through the city stopping at the police department as officers arrest Craz and take him away. Derik then takes them to the residential area and the girls put the car down on the driveway)
Derik: I can fix your car if you’d like me to.
Prof. D: No that’s fine, though, a map of town would be nice. (Derik hands him a map)
Derik: Here you are, we have the whole city, and I marked the places a superhero might want to go. There’s the dojo in town, the college for mutants, the mall because everyone goes to the mall. We’ve also got all kinds of stuff, this is a huge metropolis anyways. I’ll see you all at school tomorrow. (He waved and got back into his robot, which also waved and walked off.)
Ruby, Robin, Amy, Emmy: We’re going to the same school as Derik Kouha!? (all the girls are starry eyed)
Prof. D: Of course, he is your age after all.
(We then go back to the police department, which is being attacked by something, due to the shouting from the police. Craz slowly looks up and sees a tall muscular orange skinned man.)
:Come with me. (He waves at the bars and the bars melt away.)
Craz: Who oo oo are you?
: A friend. But you may call me, Doctor Chemical.
End Chapter 1
New Grand City Series
Super Sweet Squad
Characters Introduced:
Prof. Lyle Doctome “Prof. D”/DoctoniumMan Age:35
Alex Doctome/ Axel Age: 14
A.P.P. (Artificial Personality Pup) Age: 6 (Robot Dog)
Ruby Doctome Age: 14
Robin Doctome Age: 14
Emerald “Emmy” Doctome Age: 14
Amethyst “Amy” Doctome Age: 14
Derik Kouha Age: 14
Craz Einstein Saru “Malevolent M” Age: 25 (A Genetically altered Monkey)
Chapter 1: Welcome
(We open in the car of the Doctome Family, everyone is very quiet, Amy is reading a book, Robin is coloring something that looks like a horse, with the words cat above it, Ruby is listening to a movie on a portable DVD player, and Emmy is staring out the window, looking like she is about to punch something. Alex is working on a robot in his hands and A.P.P is asleep)
Emmy: So, Dad, Why are we moving again?
Prof. D: I told you already, because I was given a job offer there, and I can’t keep paying for the repairs on our old city off of what I make. Besides, this will be a good way for you to make new friends, and a new experience. I also heard that you won’t be alone anymore. (All of the siblings look up)
Ruby: What do you mean? (Prof. D Smiles wide)
Prof. D: New Grand City has many superheroes living here, so you won’t be so different. (All smile)
Robin: Yay, we’ll be normal!
Emmy: (aside) Some of us anyway. (The ground begins to shake and the car shakes and screeches to a halt as the road tears away and a large robot, shaped like a Monkey with a Banana on it’s forehead climbs through the crack.)
: OohOohahahah.Prof. D: Of all the- why did HE have to follow us.
Ruby: Craz E. Saru.
Craz: I, the Malevolent M, have come, once again, to destroy you, the puny, super sweet sisters. This time, I am prepared, for everything. Everything You could throw at me, it is useless, for I, The Malevolent M, Evil Genius, have created a robot, which, you girls, shall not be defeating this time. (During this monologue the robot does different poses, each one, more monkey-like and ridiculous than the last. The final one, the robot is flexing its muscles.)
Ruby: Let’s go. (she unbuckled her seat belt, the others followed suit, Doctome, Alex, and App staying. The girls then flew up into the air.)
Ruby: I was in the middle of a good movie, with my favorite actor in it too. (She Grips her fist, which coats in ice, which she then throws at the robot. It hits and begins to freeze, but the robot turns red as it melts the ice.)
Craz: Oohahaha, I knew you’d try that move, so I gave my robot an internal heater, but to combat your fireball, I also have a tundra coolant system.
Robin: You messed up my drawing, try this. (she then lets loose a high pitch screech, the waves shown bounce off and shatter the windows of the car.) oops, sorry da- (the robot punches her away.)
Craz: My robot, it is made of Pulsanium, designed to withstand any vibration. Ooohahaha.
Amy: I lost my place in my book! You hit Robin too! (She strokes her hair, and forms, what looks like, a purple bookmark, which she throws at the robot, crackling with electricity. Craz’s robot opens up a generator, absorbing the electricity.)
Craz: HahahaOoOoAh! You power my robot even more. Hahaha.
Emmy: It’s about time we had some fun. Rahh! (she flys forward and punches the robot, then backs up and releases a burst of energy from her hands, similar to a kamehameha wave. The beam bounces off of the robot and hits the ground, causing a small explosion)
Craz: ~Reflective armor~. (Craz says dancing in his robot, then charges up his own beam in one of his robots hands. Before he can release it another robot appears and rips off the hand.)
: Not so fast, you are in the jurisdiction of the NGCPD, if you refuse to come along peacefully. (Craz swings at the robot as it nimbly ducks) I’ll have to use force! (The other robot then begins fighting Craz’s robot, slowly ripping it limb from limb)Ruby: Wait, that voice! It couldn’t be, Derik Kouha, the Genius Star! (Derik’s Robot then ties the robot up, with its own arms)
Derik: I see my reputation precedes me. (He then hefts the robot over his robots shoulder the cockpit of his opens and out steps a teenage boy.) Welcome to New Grand City, I’ve heard you were coming, and wanted to welcome you. Also you’ll be happy to know that the villains of your old city have left the city.
Ruby: Omigosh, you are Derik Kouha, I’m sucha big fan! Can I have your autograph?! (She flies up to him holding an autograph book.)
Prof. D: Ruby, get down here. (Ruby flies down, the rest follow.) We’d be happy for the escort, thank you. (Prof. D turns to the girls) could you girls fly our car behind Derik’s robot? (The girls lift the car and fly into the air, following the robot, it leads them through the city stopping at the police department as officers arrest Craz and take him away. Derik then takes them to the residential area and the girls put the car down on the driveway)
Derik: I can fix your car if you’d like me to.
Prof. D: No that’s fine, though, a map of town would be nice. (Derik hands him a map)
Derik: Here you are, we have the whole city, and I marked the places a superhero might want to go. There’s the dojo in town, the college for mutants, the mall because everyone goes to the mall. We’ve also got all kinds of stuff, this is a huge metropolis anyways. I’ll see you all at school tomorrow. (He waved and got back into his robot, which also waved and walked off.)
Ruby, Robin, Amy, Emmy: We’re going to the same school as Derik Kouha!? (all the girls are starry eyed)
Prof. D: Of course, he is your age after all.
(We then go back to the police department, which is being attacked by something, due to the shouting from the police. Craz slowly looks up and sees a tall muscular orange skinned man.)
:Come with me. (He waves at the bars and the bars melt away.)Craz: Who oo oo are you?
: A friend. But you may call me, Doctor Chemical.End Chapter 1