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The story that I am mainly writing, goes here. It is an story where I have added things to animes. Please refrain from posting in here unless it is necessary. Please post in the review section if possible.

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It was supposed to be another boring day at CCA, but it was awesomely epic!
Terrorists took the school hostage. In one class, they decided to show live footage of them killing off victims to show the police that they meant business. Since this class was in teams, they took one student from each team. They took Janelle Ramos, Cameron Vigil, Seth Ortega, Jorden Altrogge, but they were having difficulties picking out the last hostage.
"Let's take the blond."one of them finally said as he grabbed Kayla Cleland's arm.
"Take me instead"said Manuel Martinez as he got in between the killers and Kayla."I would also liek to say something to Kayla before I die."
"Go ahead."said one of the terrorists
"Ahem, Kayla, I have a, uh, um, a, crush on you since the beginning of this school year and now that I finally got that off my chest, i can die in peace knowing that only the people in this room know what i said."
"You know"said one man"what you just said was being recorded live, right?"
"What!?"Manuel said in awe"Are you Frickin serious!?"
"Yeah, now the whole city knows about your confession."the camera guy said
"Since you A-holes recorded something that i never wanted to get out, I am gonna have to kill you fags."Manuel said as his necklace began to glow black until it turned completely black. Then a black cloud appeared and it seemed as though Manuel was holding something. The cloud dissipated and in its wake, there was a scythe with two heads(heads as in blades.)
"You, kill us?"The fat one said as he began to shoot Manuel four times in the chest while Kayla and the students watched in horror. Manuel kept standing then ran to each of the killers, slicing them in half. There was left alive. He was the fat one.
"Who's gonna kill who again?"Manuel said as he slid his scythe over the guy's arm till it began cutting."I am gonna make you feel the pain of all those that were hurt because of you."Manuel said as he picked up a gun and shot the guy four times in each limb before putting that poor fat B-tard out of his misery. Manuel then took out a new shirt from his backpack and put it on.
This boy was the captain of the Advanced Close-Combat Weapons club in which he had honed his skills as a "reaper."
Manuel then went over to Kayla"Are you alright? did they hurt you when they grabbed your arm?"
"Yeah, but where did you learn to do that?"Kayla said
"I guess all of those violent animes actually taught me a lot, but call me Riku since it is my codename"Man- err, i mean Riku said"Kyndol and Coral are part of the club too and they also have their own weapons."Riku said as Kyndol and Coral activated their weapons"Kyndol has a sword that is retractable, and Coral has two bladed tonfas, and now am giving this diamond staff to you, just think to yourself that you have to help, and your staff will activate"Riku said as he slid a ring onto Kayla's finger.

These are real names and this story starts in our world.