My fiction.

[Calamity2007]

Hi. I think about a month back I told you guys about my series called Cyber Lords. Anyway it's a fiction series that I made myself and have been working on for about a year now and I want to ask you guys if it could be okay if I posted it in the talent section. I have given up on the forum site I was going on before and decided to not make any new chapters for them but I still want to make chapters so it would be nice for you guys to share your opinioins about if it would be a good idea to post it here. Thanks in advance.

[Deleted]

By all means, I'd love to read it.

Just please don't get upset when we offer criticism?

[Dogmantra]

Totally awesome. Do it.

Bear in mind that if you use underlining anywhere in it, I will kill you.

[Calamity2007]

I don't really mind much criticism but I will try to do my best and be open for suggestions (not for the plot though) about my writing.

I don't really think I underlined anything and I'll try not to.

Also I posted a poll that should last for about two days so I can help make my decision from that.

[loopy]

I'd say go for it. Any publicity is good publicity.

[Dyrozix]

i like reading!1!!!!!! RAHHHH!H!HH!H!!!!

[Calamity2007]

OK I'll do it. Currently I'm redoing the whole thing because I was a little disappointed in my first time making it so I'm currently redoing the Prologue. I hope to complete it by the end of the month since of my spring break but try to be patient.

[Dyrozix]

WOOO READING FOR ME!

[Doublesuya]

If I may ask, what is "Cyber Lords"?

[Calamity2007]

Apr 18, 2010 20:11:54 GMT Doublesuya said:

If I may ask, what is "Cyber Lords"?

Well, it's a fiction I have been working on for nearly a year now. This is just a hobby of mine, not something I want to get really serious about.

In short. Cyber Lords takes place in the future where a new technology called Cyber has been invented and was able to create both helpful and destructive improvements such as sub-space colonies that float above the earth to help the population problem that the earth nearly lost it's resources over. Anyway these colonies developed their own government that was constantly at unease with the governments of the countries the respective colonies belonged to. After a time the colonies decided to declare war on the countries.

The majority of the story revolves around a teen by the name of Kieth Trinity (later to be known as Calamity). Who is the son of an important scientist and politician of one of the countries. Kieth received a mysterious bracelet at a young age that his father said to have on at all times. After a near fatal encounter with the new prime minister of the colonies, this mysteriously bracelet was able to keep him alive. He then learns that his bracelet is one of many weapons called Cyber Armors. Not only that but it contains a manifestation of light inside which is the reason Kieth was saved. He also learns that their are other manifestations of the elements around the world, some containing in other Cyber Armors. Since Kieth has become aware of his element, he is the one of a few that can find these elements. But he learns that he's not the only one who are interested in them.

This story in genre is a mix between science fiction and fantasy. My series is also inspired a little by anime but I'm trying to keep my story as original as possible. I tried to do a story that would mix the science fiction of things like mechas and other technological possibilities with some fantasy such as manifestations of elements. I am currently redoing this series as I was not happy with the first try I did with this story. I could explain more about it but I don't want to bore you, just expect to see many subplots, action scenes, and interesting characters.