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Post by appleyui on Nov 16, 2016 17:42:11 GMT
The change is stable.
Murderers frisk their salvation
And trace forgettable
Paths by the tangled
Induction.
Left leaves let the narrow
Tree, near the eternal row,
Go to the end, the frisky
Death, and the risky
Change.
But mankind conducts
As a larva, and inducts
A path; A wooded pillar
From a living caterpillar
To the endless spread
Of a butterfly.
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Post by Ayano☆ＵＬＴＲＡ on Nov 29, 2016 11:29:44 GMT
This is good! I really like how this is laid out and how it flows. Is it about how mankind have bad traits but overall is a beautiful species? It would be interesting to know what you feel it's about, being it's creator.
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Post by appleyui on Dec 1, 2016 13:31:04 GMT
This is good! I really like how this is laid out and how it flows. Is it about how mankind have bad traits but overall is a beautiful species? It would be interesting to know what you feel it's about, being it's creator. I just think humankind is still a caterpillar, but eventually, it should become greater and more immaculate. Thank you for your opinion  . |
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Post by Ayano☆ＵＬＴＲＡ on Dec 3, 2016 16:59:46 GMT
This is good! I really like how this is laid out and how it flows. Is it about how mankind have bad traits but overall is a beautiful species? It would be interesting to know what you feel it's about, being it's creator. I just think humankind is still a caterpillar, but eventually, it should become greater and more immaculate. Thank you for your opinion ;). I agree with that, it makes a lot of sense :3 Good work! :D |
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