Poem

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Atrament
As dark winds rise;
All you hear are the cries-
Of those that have tried to touch the skies,
But fell and died while fighting against the tide
As the tide of shadows hides the light;
Atrament consumes all with much delight,
As it begins to rise.

Anarchy
The fires rise;
The government falls;
A good man dies;
As our new king calls.

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That girl
As i see her again today,
All I say when i pray
Is please be safe,
So that i may see you again,
Not as a mere hen sees a worm,
But as a collector see a jewel,
Because i have one thing I wish to tell you:
I love you.

[Indigo]

As i see her again today,
All I say when i pray
Is please be safe,
So that i may see you again,
Not as a mere hen sees a worm,
But as a collector see a jewel,
Because i have one thing I wish to tell you:
I love you.

This doesn't really flow too well. 'As you see her again today...' seems like the next line will be a continuation, but then it goes on to 'when you pray,' just seems kinda unrelated and the lines are distant from each other.

Maybe this is just me, but... I don't like rhyming the same word, especially with no line in between the rhyming words.

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Betrayed
I've trusted you with my life
Yet, you've caused all my strife


Im not done with this one

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I have some pretty good poems, but i have them writen down and i left my English notebook(where I write all my poems starting on the last page, working my way to the beginning) at my friend's house

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Goodbye my friends,
My allies,
My comrades.
We will meet again.
Maybe not here, but somewhere.
Maybe not soon, but sometime.
Never forget the bonds we made.
Never forget the fights we had.
Those are what made us friends-
Friends for eternity.
I say my farewell now, but Im not going to die.
No, not die, just disappear.
Farewell my friends.

[thadudette]

(also bothered by lack of an apostrophe in a contraction)

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Clouds fly by,
Nonchalantly float by.
Never to ever lie,
Never to ever cry.
Yet we all look forward to-
The days when they will cry.

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We Will Arise

For with the dawn of the dead I shall arise,
For the attention I have of the dead men's eyes.
As they watch and they watch as if they're hypnotized.
All you hear as we rise are our strong battle cries.
And the only ones we kill are those with too many lies.
You will never hear from us our losing sighs.
You can't even imagine our immense army's size.

[Indigo]

The above poem is the next Devil May Cry's theme.

www.lyricstime.com/devil-may-cry-shall-never-surrender-lyrics.html

Oh, the next one is completely horrible... Never mind.

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Happy Together

You and me,
And me and you,
Up in a tree,
While skies are blue,
We'll look and see,
See that blue so true.
Happy as can be,
Just me and you.

[Indigo]

What about...

Happy Together?

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Nov 26, 2012 17:15:05 GMT Indigo said:

What about...

Happy Together?

Done

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Be Well
Be well my friends,
My allies too.
I know you won't meet your ends,
But I hate to see you blue.
So, get well you two,
Because I miss the both of you.

To James and Becky

[Jay24092]

Wow that poem is really really good and it means a lot again thanks riku

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I thot it up today insted of taking notes in class

[Jay24092]

Wow I sometimes doodle on my paper rather than take notes but I could never think of something like that to which I respect to no end

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Why
Why, oh why is this happening to me?
Why oh why!? Oh how can this be!?
I did everything right!
I made no mistakes!
Yet, why oh why am I here all alone?
Is this cuz of all the compassion I should've shown?
Is this cuz of how my hate is all that has grown?
Or is this because I left you all alone?

Why am I here all beaten and bloody?
Why am I trapped her in this fiery inferno?
This is all your fault!
I'm here because of you!
You've just made an enemy out of me!
Now I'm comin for you and I only wanna hear you scream!

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The Son
The son of speed and of bad luck
Has two destinies,
Yes, two paths he can take.
One is sad, twisted and dark.
The other is straight and bright.

The Dark Path
The son of speed and of bad luck
Has chosen the path of darkness.
He has betrayed his friends,
Causing them to meet their ends.
Sadly, he feels no remorse.

The Bright Path
The son of speed and of bad luck
Has chosen the path of brightness.
He fights beside his friends,
Protecting them from their ends.
He is here where he belongs.

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Day one, I wander about, not knowing if im dead or just alone.
Day two, I find some shelter, but can this realy be my home?
Day three, I realize it's only been night, will the light ever be shone?
Day four, Im tired of being alone, will i ever truly be saved?
Day five, i wander in sadness and come upon a lonely grave.
Day five, This grave right here, it is my own grave.
Day five, I have come to terms, and i slowly whither away.