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Post by Stove on Jan 1, 2012 5:06:55 GMT
Discussion of my story goes here! Tell me your thoughts, whether you like it or not, anything, just DON'T CLOG THE STORY THREAD.
A few things:
1) This is not based on Code Geass. I've had this basic idea for several years.
2) A few rules about silvertongue that will also be mentioned/discovered later:
-It only works in a 500 meter radius. People stop following commands once Yuki and the target are more than that far apart.
-It can't be used via speakers. Only her actual voice.
-It cant be used to make someone do something or write something they don't know. The stupider you are, the safer you are.
-If two met, the one with the stronger will would pull through, but an enhanced model would help too....(hint,hint.)
3) It's called silvertounge, because....
Imagine if someone bribed you not to tell a small secret with a massive lump of silver. It's irresistable, for most people at least. There's a reason it's not goldentongue, but mainly because silvertongue sounds better.
And I'll put in other stuff later.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 1, 2012 11:08:50 GMT
I wonder who clicked no?
Anyway good story but too code geassy even if it wasn't based on it. I'd hope that you do your best to make it deviate from the path as it goes on.
Silver tongues a good name because people with silver tonges generally get what they want out of people, and by silver tonge they simply mean they're good at talking.
On little nitpick, Yuki is a japanese name however she lives in Englad, and was presumably born in england.
Wouldn't she have an english name?
Also, Yuki is based of Anya I bet.
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Post by Stove on Jan 1, 2012 13:23:05 GMT
I wonder who clicked no? Anyway good story but too code geassy even if it wasn't based on it. I'd hope that you do your best to make it deviate from the path as it goes on. Silver tongues a good name because people with silver tonges generally get what they want out of people, and by silver tonge they simply mean they're good at talking. On little nitpick, Yuki is a japanese name however she lives in Englad, and was presumably born in england. Wouldn't she have an english name? Also, Yuki is based of Anya I bet. I'm sure the no is Riku trying to be funny. Anya and Yuki, while similar, are not based on each other. There's an important reason with her name. It will be covered later. |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 1, 2012 13:28:31 GMT
Something to do with snow I imagine.
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Post by Stove on Jan 1, 2012 13:33:35 GMT
Something to do with snow I imagine. ? Snow? |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 1, 2012 14:01:49 GMT
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Post by Stove on Jan 1, 2012 14:59:06 GMT
OHHH. Now I see what you were getting at. you're half right.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 1, 2012 16:10:35 GMT
If Seth is deaf how can they have civilised conversation...?
You should probably put something in there about lip reading, unless I'm missing something glaringly obvious.
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Post by Stove on Jan 1, 2012 16:36:55 GMT
^ahem...  |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 1, 2012 16:43:18 GMT
I knew I missed something...
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Post by Stove on Jan 1, 2012 16:48:58 GMT
^It's fine. ;D
so.....about the Code Geass rp....you gonna post?
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Post by Deleted on Jan 1, 2012 16:55:08 GMT
Yeah in a bit...
Where is everyone today?
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Post by Stove on Jan 1, 2012 16:56:08 GMT
^Most people have stuff to do on Sunday.
Unlike us.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 14, 2012 23:47:30 GMT
Main Villan? Nice and simple, no complications and clear cut- I respect that.
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Post by Stove on Jan 14, 2012 23:55:07 GMT
Yep.
A little insight on how EVIL he is:
He took over the world for fun, kills people for fun, reinstituted serious racist slavery all around the world, and tore apart families.
Also, Mr. Amina is Lloyd Amina.
Miku's dad, who she thinks is dead.
And Gold....
I typed that chapter with my 3ds.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 20, 2012 21:58:48 GMT
more written in fanservice. You seem to like doing that a lot, but I suppose I'm not a whole lot better.
Yeah. Good watchya macallit.
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Post by Stove on Jan 20, 2012 22:44:12 GMT
more written in fanservice. You seem to like doing that a lot, but I suppose I'm not a whole lot better. Yeah. Good watchya macallit. Fansevice? No. Like I said, I've already wrote to ch. 14 |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 20, 2012 23:07:54 GMT
Whats how much you've written got to do with girls in towels...?
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Post by Stove on Jan 21, 2012 4:35:08 GMT
Whats how much you've written got to do with girls in towels...? Eh...one little part. Not that major. |
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